Group: Evaluation and Feedback on Rough Cut

• For our lesson on friday, we were asked to create a rough cut of our footage so far for our final production. We recieved mostly positive feedback for our rough cut, with only very little negative feedback that involved the order of our shots, as it was quite unclear what was happening, and someone also pointed out that one of our shots needed to be shot again as it was too dark to see, this was the shot of Dan's feet walking along the pavement.
• Our positive feedback was varied and from many members of the class. Dan said our lighting was very good as it created a mysterious feel about the opening, and that it was very conventional of film noir. Molly said our opening shot was very effective for setting the scene. Dan also noted that our sound was very crisp and highly effective to support the mysterious feel. Rozzy noted that our use of pull focus and close ups were very attractive and reinforced the mysterious feel, and Miss Johnson praised our consideration of mise-en-scene.